Show us your Creative-side

What do you do that's Creative? I will show you mines if you show me yours....lol..as soon as I get them back on my pc.

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Permalink Reply by Michelle on August 28, 2009 at 6:18am

WOW!! beautiful hun!! ;)

Anna said:

Permalink Reply by Joaris ~* on August 28, 2009 at 6:32am

Nice work...I really like it!

Anna said:

Permalink Reply by Joaris ~* on August 28, 2009 at 6:33am

I like this one too...beautiful!

Michelle said:

WOW!! beautiful hun!! ;)

Anna said:

Permalink Reply by Alison Kronstadt on September 4, 2009 at 5:22pm

I'm not much of a realistic artist, though I do dabble in abstract. So yeah. I mostly write. Here's a poem I wrote a while ago.

Breakdown Sequence

First, the shell.

It smiles. It saves you. It always saves you.

When you're lost,

Who else can keep your lies intact?

Who else knows how to smile

And say, "I'm fine,"

Except your mask.

You wouldn't be lost without it,

But they might figure you out

And that would be worse.

Then, the envy.

It is the lightning bolt your smile hides.

Oh, but it's so methodical—

Taking notes on every asset,

Monitoring all character traits,

Making sure you know who's good.

And they're all so good.

It seethes like a fire,

And no one smells the smoke.

And the doubt,

Standing second in this set of triplets.

It whispers where your envy roars,

Yet the constant murmured questions can do more,

Much more damage than a pinch of jade green.

You can self-actualize,

But once the seed is planted, it doesn't come out,

You smile at their reassurance

But you know they don't know.

Third, insecurity.

If doubt is a whisper, this is less:

A thought, a reflex.

Yet the thought is from your brain,

The reflex is from your body.

It is a part of who you are,

Someone strong could change that, but this is you, remember

And even as you bleed to death,

It’s telling you red clashes with your skin.

(In the center,

It’s that smile,

That friendboygirl smile,

The one your mouth’s forgotten how to make)

I hope you like it!

Permalink Reply by Joaris ~* on September 17, 2009 at 6:34am

Your poem is AWESOME alison! sorry I didn't comment on it earlier...I hope to see more..love it!

Alison Kronstadt said:

I'm not much of a realistic artist, though I do dabble in abstract. So yeah. I mostly write. Here's a poem I wrote a while ago.

Breakdown Sequence

First, the shell.

It smiles. It saves you. It always saves you.

When you're lost,

Who else can keep your lies intact?

Who else knows how to smile

And say, "I'm fine,"

Except your mask.

You wouldn't be lost without it,

But they might figure you out

And that would be worse.

Then, the envy.

It is the lightning bolt your smile hides.

Oh, but it's so methodical—

Taking notes on every asset,

Monitoring all character traits,

Making sure you know who's good.

And they're all so good.

It seethes like a fire,

And no one smells the smoke.

And the doubt,

Standing second in this set of triplets.

It whispers where your envy roars,

Yet the constant murmured questions can do more,

Much more damage than a pinch of jade green.

You can self-actualize,

But once the seed is planted, it doesn't come out,

You smile at their reassurance

But you know they don't know.

Third, insecurity.

If doubt is a whisper, this is less:

A thought, a reflex.

Yet the thought is from your brain,

The reflex is from your body.

It is a part of who you are,

Someone strong could change that, but this is you, remember

And even as you bleed to death,

It’s telling you red clashes with your skin.

(In the center,

It’s that smile,

That friendboygirl smile,

The one your mouth’s forgotten how to make)

I hope you like it!